10/02/14

Today we got back our grades from our draft magazines, we got feedback back and we had a chance to improve our magazine to the best we can. This meant we could establish where our falls where and where we was strongest at, it was eveident to me I needed to imporve my magazine.

 

This was my original last page when I handed it in as draft in comparison to the final product which I have now created, it is clear I have made some big changes in order to push my points up. Changing the image and moving around the boxes has created a more professional magazine.